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Wednesday, July 16, 2008

சொர்கமே என்றாலும்....(வெண்பா)








சேவல் எழுப்ப எழுந்த நிறைவு
செல்போன் சிணுங்க எழுவதில் இல்லை!
வெட்ட வெளியில் குளித்த மகிழ்ச்சி
சீலை மறைவில் குளிப்பதில் இல்லை!
ஆவி பறக்கும் உணவின் அறுசுவை
ஆவி மறையும் உணவினில் இல்லை!
பனைகளும் பாதமுமாய் வாழ்ந்த பயணம்
வினைகளும் வேகமுமாய் வாழ்வதில் இல்லை!
அன்று நிலவிய அச்சொர்க்கம் ஏனோ
இன்று நிலைத்தபடி இல்லை!!

8 Comments:

  • மனிதனுக்கு சேவலும் தேவ இல்லை , செல்பேசியும் தேவ இல்லை, குழியலும் தேவ இல்லை, அதன் குழிர்சியும் தேவ இல்லை, அவனுக்கு முதலில் தூக்கம் தான் , இல்லையா ? :) :)

    Good Show !!

    By Blogger Raghu, At July 18, 2008 at 10:41 AM  

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    By Blogger Raghu, At July 18, 2008 at 10:43 AM  

  • தேவை instead of தேவ :),, :)

    By Blogger Raghu, At July 18, 2008 at 10:45 AM  

  • குளிர்ச்சி ../. iis another mistake..yet another apology :) :( !

    By Blogger Raghu, At July 18, 2008 at 10:57 AM  

  • Dear Mani,
    I am very pleased that you have made efforts to research and learn about understandinng the grammaer and structure of writing 'VENPA'.I have read all your writings and your extracted gist of 'ilakkanam;iyarpiyal;amaippu;santham;solnayam;oosai nayam;etc;etc;' of structure of a VENPA and amazed about your sincere efforts to convert your kavithai on 'hypocrits' into a venpa and how venpa changed its original structure and phonetics. Congratulations. Keep it up. Coming to this poem 'Sorgamae Enralum..'Well wrtten Venba with lot of depth.
    You are expressing comparison of mordern life with olden care free village life. Seval koovi ezhunthalum cellphone koovi ezhunthalum Etharkkaga ezhynthom enbathil thane inbam allathu inbaminmai! Kulir niraitha earkai valam mikka thennai marangalum neerodaiyum soozhntha soozhalil naraha thoongi aluppae illamal ezhum kali iniyathuthan. But it is possible or practical even in today's remote Indian Villages.
    As far as I am concerned I very much believe in the state of mind which we can train to keep it happy. Happiness is within us. What ever we cherished and enjoyed from child hood can be carried within our selves as videos and audios in our own mind and replay for own happiness any time we like. When I was reading a passage in Ilaiyaraja's 'EN NARAMBU VEENAI' A great scholar has written about Ilaiyaraja how he managed remain alone amidst crowd and was able to ahve the solitude to think about all his 'aanmeegam' to seek god while he was surrounded by the money,falsehood,glitter and glamour of Cinema World where he is working. that gave me an insight into what can be achieved.

    Tail peice request: I'm keen to use Tamil writings and fonds in the computer would you please tell me how to do it.

    Dr T Subramanian.

    By Blogger drsubbu, At July 20, 2008 at 1:34 PM  

  • Dear Mani,
    I am very pleased that you have made efforts to research and learn about understandinng the grammaer and structure of writing 'VENPA'.I have read all your writings and your extracted gist of 'ilakkanam;iyarpiyal;amaippu;santham;solnayam;oosai nayam;etc;etc;' of structure of a VENPA and amazed about your sincere efforts to convert your kavithai on 'hypocrits' into a venpa and how venpa changed its original structure and phonetics. Congratulations. Keep it up. Coming to this poem 'Sorgamae Enralum..'Well wrtten Venba with lot depth depth.
    You are expressing comparison of mordern life with olden care free village life. Seval koovi ezhunthalum cellphone koovi ezhunthalum Etharkkaga ezhynthom enbathil thane inbam allathu inbaminmai! Kulir niraitha earkai valam mikka thennai marangalum neerodaiyum soozhntha soozhalil naraha thoongi aluppae illamal ezhum kali iniyathuthan. Butis it possible or practical even in today's remote Indian Villages?.
    As far as I am concerned I very much believe in the state of mind which we can train to keep it happy. Happiness is within us. What ever we cherished and enjoyed from child hood can be carried within our selves as videos and audios in our own mind and replay for own happiness any time we like. When I was reading a passage in Ilaiyaraja's 'EN NARAMBU VEENAI' A great scholar has written about Ilaiyaraja how he managed remain alone amidst crowd and was able to ahve the solitude to think about all his 'aanmeegam' to seek god while he was surrounded by the money,falsehood,glitter and glamour of Cinema World where he is working. that gave me an insight into what can be achieved.

    Tail peice request: I'm keen to use Tamil writings and fonds in the computer would you please tell me how to do it.

    Dr T Subramanian.

    By Blogger drsubbu, At July 20, 2008 at 1:37 PM  

  • Mani,

    Thamizhin pal unakkulla pattrirku enathu siram thazhntha vanakkam.

    Vazhha un thamizh puzhamai.

    By Blogger Karthik, At July 15, 2009 at 5:23 AM  

  • vennila iravil.katalin asaivil.poothukkulungum pokkal .urangum nerathil. panien.kattru.ethazai varudum neram.agayatthil senru enmagarani elamangani en azagu tevathaizanakkaha kathirukkiral nan senrathum vzhi yal pesinal.maonikka venai ponra aval edaienasaivu.muthukkalai sithara vittadhu pol aval parkkal.madhuratthai araitthu posiyathu pol aval mogam..............................................................

    Unnai
    Endha Alavukku
    Pidikkum Enru
    Theriyavillai…
    Aanal!
    Unnai
    Pidiththa Alavukku
    Indha Ulagaththil
    Veru Edhuvum
    Enakku Pidikkavillai…
    MY DEAR I LOVE YOU FOREVER…
    baladrammar

    By Blogger பெண்கள் மலரல்ல முள், At October 31, 2009 at 6:18 AM  

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